When I went back to read my essays written in 2005, I like this topic the best, because it allows people to think 2 different way, unlike others topic such, “All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school” or “There is nothing that young people can teach older people”.
To get a high score, you do not need to think the same thing as it should be, but you just need to finish it, and give the clear statement.
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2005 ESSAY
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A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either # to go on a vacation # to buy a car.
If you have a car, you are perfect and if you take a trip in your vacation and you’re funny, you are the most perfect.
The car is important for a working man because her uses it for both of go and back from his office. A film star or the rich shows his standing with the expensive car. A traveling person wants to have the car because it comforts for long journey and carrying the big stuff. In the other side, the thing you get after you buy the car is the big burden that you cannot reject. Now, petrol isn’t cheap for general people. The working man must pay his money over 10,000 bahts for car’s petrol. So the car will be one of the extravagant irons that everybody doesn’t want to have.
The journey is a short trip. It’s a time that passes when the trip ends. You cannot show your rich if someone you tell to, doesn’t know that place. You cannot get anything that you can touch if you didn’t buy. But the large things, you cannot get from another place, are the big experience, something you meet and touch and cannot find if in the world anymore. More than that, it’s perhaps the one time in your life. If the journey compares with the car buying, you get the car and the big petrol burden after you buy it, for the journey, you still hold your great pleasure as long as your age.
Ask me which choices I choose for my friend who gets the money. I will advise him, take a trip for your vacation, forget all of your work, your seriousness and go on with happy funny fine days.