All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school : Sample Essay


In 2005, I took TOEFL test twice. Almost all essay topics they threw to us have already had answers in their mine. I think it will be interesting, if you try to think differently. For me, that time I was 17 years old, and I did not think differently. For example, “There is nothing that young people can teach older people”, my answer was young people can teach older people; and for this one, “All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school”, my answer was we all should take art and music class.

Even right now, I feel I did bad job in TOEFL essay, that was still the part that I got highest scores. Maybe, I could finish whole essay in time, but others did not.

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2005 ESSAY
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All students should be required to study art and music in secondary school

I am convinced that everybody needs to learn art and music because it’s the best way for relaxation and free time spending.

Line of melody can make the life’s ease by remedied problem so everyone wants to listen to it. Art and music are alike. People see the art gallery for their beautiful mind, so the both are health therapy. Almost people understand that everyone to one likes so the kind of music and art should be the one they like. If they play, draw figure by themselves, they will get the type they need and the real happy with it. For the example, someone sees a painting and does not like the red color in this. He cannot do everything on the others but he can print a new one he likes.

The easiest choice paint a new one he likes is watching television. The worse is game playing and the worst is about smoking, drinking in nightclub. One the other hand, the best choice is creation of art and music. Everyone can be enjoyable and practice the skill of art and music with intelligence. As a person who uses to go to a pub for his own destruction, but when he plays musical instrument in the same place, he receives money instead of his illness.

Ultimately, a man is helped about time spender, mind, occupation and health by art and music. Therefore, it’s right that students choose to study art and music because it will help them for development to be absolute adult.

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